Donna Massam

Hayley Jennings Edit

The only differences between mine and Hayley's edits is the title and the credits. The video footage is the same.

Titles:
Hayley's title is centered, whilst mine is set to the top left. I set mine to the top left as it wasn't the typical place to put the title and also looked effective.
(Mine)
I have used bold and sharp looking text and Hayley has used a more curved and slender style. In my opinion i think that the bold and sharp text works better as it reflects onto the movies characteristics.
(Hayley's)
I actually prefer the colour that Hayley has used for the text because it stands out and contrasts against the black background whereas if you look at mine it is dark against the background so it is more difficult to read.

Credits:
One thing that i have noticed about Hayley's movie is that she has used the same text for both the title and the credits, i think that this works well as it keeps familiarity within the movie. This actually makes it easier for the viewer.
(Mine)
Again Hayley has used a brighter white while i used a dull Grey, making her text stand out better against the black background, making it easier for the viewer to reader.
(Hayley's)
I have also included music at the end of my movie whereas Hayley hasn't, this gives the two movies different feels, where mine will give off a sad and quite depressing feel off to the users, Hayley gives off a blunt stop, with no sound, although i think that this actually works because it gives the user a silent minute to take in what has happened in the movie i actually think the music works better because i think that the music creates more of an atmosphere to the viewer.