Wednesday 14 November 2007
From Hayley Jennings Blog
It will start with John (Cliff) stood in the middle with the spotlight focused on him. However, the light will also show the features of three people stood around him. A person each side, and one person almost hiding behind him.
He will talk about person 1, Jeniffer (Donna). Once he is finished talking about her, she will step away from him and out of the shot.
He will talk about person 2, Jade (Me). Once he is finished talking about her, she backs off out of the shot too.
Finally, he talks about person 3, Daniel (Tom), who steps from behind him to once side of him so he's more visible. Once he's finished talking about him, he backs off.
He will say a small piece of dialogue afterwards all alone, then the light will cut.
Lights go out.
The sound of a body hitting the floor is heard, then silence until the final line "Now I have no one...and no one has me." I'm hoping this will be hard hitting, as it's will make people realise that he's dead. I also like how poetic is sounds, as it turns the sentence around part way through.
The reason why I chose Tom to be stood almost hiding behind Cliff is because I thought it would work better for people wondering why he is obscured, and also shows how he hid himself from Cliff by staying behind him.
